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Have you ever encountered dead bodies lying on the sidewalk in front of your house? That is a grussom image, but that same picture is found in video games. From Eugene F. Provenzo Jr., Jack Thompson, and Dave Grossman clearly indicate that childrens’ involvement of video games takes a drastic twist into their lives. Eugene F. Provenzo is a “professor of education at the University of Miami and the author of Children and Hyperreality.”(1). Jack Thompson wrote a “Beacon journal in Ohio October 6 2003 about games promoting violence.”(1). Dave Grossman is a “retired army officer and the author of On Killing: The Psychological Cost of Learning to Kill in War and Society and the co-author of Stop Teaching Our Kids to Kill: A Call to Action Against TV, Movie, and Video Games Violence.”(1). By the age of 12, the average child has been exposed to a massive amount of gang violence, sexism, and drug abuse due to video games, therefore video games should be censored.
According to Jack Thompson, in the game Grand Theft Auto (GTA), “Lynch’s favorite way to kill in the game was to beat victims with a baseball bat because you get more points for killing at close range.”(2). Gang violence is exposed in the game Grand Theft Auto (GTA), which also invovles stealing cars from different individuals is another devasting crime. Thompson goes on to say that Lynch is called “zombified” while he is playing this obsessive game. (2). Another incident involving a 15 year old boy, on September 24, 2003, the 15 year old boy shot two of his classmates, killing one and critically wounding another. According to his neighbors with whom Jack have spoken to, he was constantly playing Grand Theft Auto Vice City.
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